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Good morning everyone, still not much writing time but always good to write something about trains, so here's a wee draft for #PoemsAbout #LastTrain. Thanks @alanparrywriter.co.uk @thebrokenspine.co.uk as always! #poem #poetrycommunity

I agree with all that has already been said. I think the last line brings the first line into focus so well, the “you” making it clear why the narrator ran to catch the train. It was so enjoyable to take this ride as a reader.